tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post6793670814536885077..comments2024-01-01T21:19:43.721+13:00Comments on THE LAST VISIBLE DOG: One of me PoemsKatehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12453125929159161583noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-89480182143926848222009-02-15T23:24:00.000+13:002009-02-15T23:24:00.000+13:00Not only a poem but each verse is a limerick. Clev...Not only a poem but each verse is a limerick. Clever. Nicely paced. Move over Pam Ayers! <BR/><BR/>I once was part of a political discussion that was conducted entirely in Limericks, which was fun for the week or so before it descended into...well, what it descended into, but haven't tried it since. Don't you find that once you start using a very strict rhyme scheme like a limerick, it gets sort of stuck and after a while everything begins to resolve itself into aabbaKelvin Wrighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16682322819567886400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-38453684340216701482009-02-15T22:25:00.000+13:002009-02-15T22:25:00.000+13:00Hi - if you didn't know Plath (who I either haven'...Hi - if you didn't know Plath (who I either haven't grown into or have already grown out of) - do you know Dylan Thomas? Please look for some if not!EBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09405771860220362327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-18804792926671478612009-02-13T22:50:00.000+13:002009-02-13T22:50:00.000+13:00Why, thank you YP. I admit I had to look her up.Why, thank you YP. I admit I had to look her up.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12453125929159161583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-81791680712385428992009-02-13T11:54:00.000+13:002009-02-13T11:54:00.000+13:00Eat your heart out Sylvia Plath!Eat your heart out Sylvia Plath!Yorkshire Puddinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06019673884543913089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-22915165984696390372009-02-13T09:39:00.000+13:002009-02-13T09:39:00.000+13:00Thank you for your comments everyone. But don't e...Thank you for your comments everyone. But don't encourage me too much, I have others equally er silly. And that's a threat.<BR/><BR/>Thank you for your congratulations Dan.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12453125929159161583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-57532011803157350982009-02-13T06:57:00.000+13:002009-02-13T06:57:00.000+13:00Now THAT would have made me cry, too! Some things ...Now THAT would have made me cry, too! Some things just aren`t allowed to happen. But a very cute poem, well done! Thanks for sharing it with us!Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06484336744673299416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-80815598432547634092009-02-13T06:31:00.000+13:002009-02-13T06:31:00.000+13:00Hehe... That's lovely poem! Such a tragic tale. It...Hehe... That's lovely poem! Such a tragic tale. It would certainly devastate me to see so much chocolate go to waste.Juliet Colorshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11025226200022095877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-72536038413786945142009-02-13T05:43:00.000+13:002009-02-13T05:43:00.000+13:00Well, and i think you need to do a painting to go ...Well, and i think you need to do a painting to go along with your lovely poem!<BR/>xxLori annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02860428306713379828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-59465962948185855212009-02-13T03:30:00.000+13:002009-02-13T03:30:00.000+13:00Pam Ayres eat your heart out :)Jsut wanted to say ...Pam Ayres eat your heart out :)<BR/><BR/>Jsut wanted to say thanks for taking the time to visit and comment on my blog :)Kim Ayreshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02656677501116622953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-56094873220251937402009-02-12T22:00:00.000+13:002009-02-12T22:00:00.000+13:00I think that's great fun :) I don't think the met...I think that's great fun :) I don't think the meter being irregular matters at all because it makes it seem the more childlike and playful.EBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09405771860220362327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-74689769627950285872009-02-12T19:22:00.000+13:002009-02-12T19:22:00.000+13:00Thanks for sharing. The world needs more paintings...Thanks for sharing. The world needs more paintings and poetry and plays, P-Class dinghies and songs and sonatas and sculptures and so on.<BR/><BR/>Congratulations on going back to school.Dan Gurneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11628603380292404658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519638191408360845.post-51197649132990807622009-02-12T19:02:00.000+13:002009-02-12T19:02:00.000+13:00Ooooo chocolate cake..time for a midnight snack!On...Ooooo chocolate cake..time for a midnight snack!<BR/>One moment on the lips, the next turned into fat.<BR/><BR/>Lovely poem, I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it. Very cute.Sistertexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14944458164626912003noreply@blogger.com