When I was eleven my mum, my dad and my sister Jane
Sailed to England and back again
By day travelled around
castle, museum and mound,
And at night parked our 'van in a lane.
One day we went on a double-decker bus
To a teashop in Piccadilly Cir-cuss.
(There're no animals there -
It's a roundabout where
You can go to the movies or have lunch like us).
I was sitting giving my biscuit some bites
And watching the people and all of the sights.
A man bought a whole cake,
It was placed on a plate,
- A creamy chocolate monster, feathery light.
I watched as weaving through the shop he went
Around customers, children, a white-haired old gent.
A waitress bustled about
I shouted "Look out!"
But she bumped him. And the cake began its descent.
Now the waitress was short, perhaps not well-fed
I expect her toes would be half way down her bed.
The man was right above
She'd given him a shove, and
All that cream, all that chocolate, all right on her head!
Ooooo chocolate cake..time for a midnight snack!
ReplyDeleteOne moment on the lips, the next turned into fat.
Lovely poem, I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it. Very cute.
Thanks for sharing. The world needs more paintings and poetry and plays, P-Class dinghies and songs and sonatas and sculptures and so on.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on going back to school.
I think that's great fun :) I don't think the meter being irregular matters at all because it makes it seem the more childlike and playful.
ReplyDeletePam Ayres eat your heart out :)
ReplyDeleteJsut wanted to say thanks for taking the time to visit and comment on my blog :)
Well, and i think you need to do a painting to go along with your lovely poem!
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Hehe... That's lovely poem! Such a tragic tale. It would certainly devastate me to see so much chocolate go to waste.
ReplyDeleteNow THAT would have made me cry, too! Some things just aren`t allowed to happen. But a very cute poem, well done! Thanks for sharing it with us!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments everyone. But don't encourage me too much, I have others equally er silly. And that's a threat.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your congratulations Dan.
Eat your heart out Sylvia Plath!
ReplyDeleteWhy, thank you YP. I admit I had to look her up.
ReplyDeleteHi - if you didn't know Plath (who I either haven't grown into or have already grown out of) - do you know Dylan Thomas? Please look for some if not!
ReplyDeleteNot only a poem but each verse is a limerick. Clever. Nicely paced. Move over Pam Ayers!
ReplyDeleteI once was part of a political discussion that was conducted entirely in Limericks, which was fun for the week or so before it descended into...well, what it descended into, but haven't tried it since. Don't you find that once you start using a very strict rhyme scheme like a limerick, it gets sort of stuck and after a while everything begins to resolve itself into aabba